100 Word Challenge-Week 13

The year was 1872, my team and I were traveling through the Jungles of Borneo. There, in the middle of the jungle, was the famous cavern, Mulu Caves. Without hesitation, we entered the dark, gloomy cave. We had been in the cave for three hours and we found nothing. However, just as we were about to give up, we found hundreds of items made out of gold. We colected as much gold as we could to take back home. After an hour of collecting priceless items, we decided to head back to camp. However, the Jovial tiger was blocking our escape. Ahhhhh!

1 Comment

  1. Good job, I like the suspense! However you should clarify the part “However, the jovial tiger was blocking our escape.” It seemed like you were describing it was friendly and joyful, so it did not seem to fit.

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